Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Friday, June 28, 2013

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Rating: 5.0

Smile differs
With something to offer
To avert war
If so then smile like star
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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» U Aung Myint very good indeed. Some Girl Yes a smile is infectious, smile and you will continue to smile :)

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20 hours ago Elzbieta Kry.. very.... nice.... dziekuje.... Sana Shahid Very nice poem! ! ! thank you! ! ! ANALIA PALEST.. Thanks, dear friend

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DEVKISHAN MEH.. Smile is free To feel under tree With its coolness Some shine may rush on face

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» Vanisha.... the Smile should not go in waste.. Sarcastic smile has everything to tell Old man realizes it at the time of death It is acknowledged with self admission.. so then smile like star

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Tanvi, That brings happy smile In its own style As if fulfillment of life’s mission It is acknowledged with self admission

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Promila Sharma Awesome

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prasad bolimeru nice williams Prince nice

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U Aung Myint very good indeed.

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Wonderful review of something we all do Jeff Phillips3 days ago This poem described the smile well in it's many facets. What I would humbly suggest is to have the words, phrases and thoughts flow, unless you were trying to achieve a more staccato form of writing. Comment +1

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Smile differs With something to offer To avert war If so then smile like star

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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