With Presence Comments

your words made me smile. This was so lovely thank you for sharing. 8 hours ago by laura duran | Reply

Wow man, this is awesome. I can definitely tell you know what you're doing with nearly 10,000 poems. It really shows. I might add a comma after the word Yes, but that's just me and i think you have a really impeccable piece here. That's the only thing that really stuck out as a possible fix, but it's not really needed if you like the exact juxtaposition of the stanzas and the poem itself. 8 hours ago by Peter Hamilton | Reply

Very true. Presence of some one special can usher in sea change.

This is a wonderful poem.Your presence makes all the deference 2 hours ago by venkata lakshmi narasimharao to With presence in life