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Dear Mamta, i liked this poem sooooooooooo much.. so much in such short verses. thank u. i could not find ur warm welcome to incredible india. tell me the number of this poem in ur list. thank u

Spare, elegant not a word wasted. I like this one very much. Love, SandraX

Well woven verse. Transcending beauty in it. CP

Lovely Haiku Mamta with beautiful imagery