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Yes, we know. And you brought that magical feeling to life. Good poetry gently floats you back to a time and place you thought you'd forgotten. Thanks for sharing.

oh, this piece touches my heart and moves me towards romance like nothing you've written before! I love this one Stevie! Great Ink! ! ! ; -) -Kelly.

nice conceit. focused and well-made. MM

Very well written Stevie. I like this one.