Thursday, September 28, 2006
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Rating: ★5.0
Equipped with nothing,
only pieces of my past.
I make my way across
my life a broken, beaten
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Tara very irritated with PH injustice
16 October 2006
Excellent flow to this piece. Jam-packed with imagery. Finely composed. t x
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Brian Dorn
28 September 2006
Raymond, I like your 'suitcase of memories' line... it certainly personifies so many ended relationships. Great write! Brian
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7/21/2025 6:18:35 AM # 1.0.0
This is an excellent poem - truly excellent. Somehow the contemplation of ending it all seems like a natural and honest consequence of what went before. No histrionics, no bitterness, so well crafted, - excellent.