Wednesday, April 22, 2015

With My Young Ones Comments

Rating: 5.0

Feeling excited and alive...
Off to meet my children!
After four months of separation...
Eyes bright with anticipation.
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COMMENTS
Bharati Nayak 11 March 2016

A love filled home is really blessed.A beautiful write on your blissful family, thnks for sharing.

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Dr Antony Theodore 11 September 2015

After four months of separation... Eyes bright with anticipation. Holidaying with my children... Each moment to capture and treasure. value of the presence of the loved ones... cheer, compromise, egoless, selfless, Praying to shower HIS mercy infinite such a joy you express and give the reader a sense of the real and ideal family. thank you very much God bless.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 April 2015

Deep expression of love towards son. Nicely and aptly presented. Beautiful poem I like most. Many thanks.

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Melissa Tamayo 26 April 2015

Beautiful way to describe the love for your son. I can relate to this poem because I have two sons. I worry how they will end up.. Thanks for sharing

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 24 April 2015

A mother's love, concerns and happiness beautifully described!

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Gajanan Mishra 22 April 2015

repeated advice made no difference, true, thanks.

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