Thursday, May 14, 2009

With My Self Comments

Rating: 5.0

They said, come join us
We can all stay together
We can have lot of fun
We can even save money
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Kranthi Pothineni
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Antonio Liao 24 January 2010

It’s the smile that tells the heart...as the soul dreamingly waits for that Beauty to come....oh! flourishing soul waits my destiny for the wind gather flower for you my dear heart....you got my passion my friend...excellent poem...God bless...a 10 +++++++++

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to be with yourself is possible even amidst a crowd

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Catrina Heart 17 May 2009

To live with my self is a nice vivid theme. To have a true communion with yourself is a splendor things for all your thoughts and actions goes in unison and soundly behaves to the nature....Thanks!

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Louis Rams 17 May 2009

we are all students, teachers, and writers, and some more than others. good write

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Eyan Desir 16 May 2009

Kranthi can I say this comment as a friend? ok this poem is nice... But most of your poems Have the same pattern I want to see A different kind of poetry from you..... 10s........

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you're like me.. multiply personalities, , , lool.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 15 May 2009

yeah self is the true friend and self is the foe.........if it controlled then it is friend otherwise it is foe..........A Good Write.....

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Sathyanarayana M V S 15 May 2009

This is what is called as 'Atma Rati' or 'Anthar mukham'. In English we can say introspection etc. Very well written.

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Kesav Easwaran 15 May 2009

so you are happy with your blessed self! thanks...imaginative work

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Joseph Poewhit 15 May 2009

Being by one's self brings much understanding

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rago rago 15 May 2009

an enjoyable beautiful write about with myself........an inspirational poem......well penned...........

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Janell Cressman 15 May 2009

Hey I really like how all your poems are written as if your talking to someone. really injoyed this one! !

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Smiley Hooker 15 May 2009

nice! when you're happy, that's what living is all about.: -) : -) : -)

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Lee Crowell 15 May 2009

all three of us agree that this poem has a message me, myself, and I

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