With My Own Pain Comments

Sad, so sad, but I have been on that same old road myself... Warm regards Theodora

this is fantastic. a bit sad, but fantastic. cheers, Jake

Finely expressed. It put me in mind instantly of Van Gogh's paintings against his black and grey drawings...

Really dark and the language reflects the pain. I particularly liked this poem the most of the 3 you submitted today, especially the muddy pebbles as the tears, the dead cotton in the hot field and, so powerful, the murderer being your own pain. Vivid images, thanks. I am weeping now...

Good work Sandra, but I will have to write a comedy to cheer you up. Best wishes, herbert