Wednesday, June 24, 2020

With My Mind My Soul Is Lost Comments

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With Mind My Soul is Lost

Bough of your flowers was ready,
Only the conch was not present,
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Prabir Gayen
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Ayan Mondal 01 July 2020

Bough of your flowers was ready, Only the conch was not present, The air that blows through forest stopped blowing, The day was good Yet dreary.

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Ayan Mondal 29 June 2020

You came with silent steps with the beating of my heart, You came with the blooming of buds as sprinkle of mystic mist, You came as sweet dream onto my self...//

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 25 June 2020

because you are not reading PPME any more Go read the latest PH is now ignoring poets ike and of course me They will rely on dead ones only PGGGGGGGGGGG

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Soumee Sarkar 25 June 2020

Deep horizon and the blue Firmament made a thin veil, Under my heavy mind My soul is lost.

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Srijan Mondal 25 June 2020

The bough of my being with Fragrant flowers was not in order, My stupid mind was insipid and under the grip of deep slumber.

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Srijan Mondal 25 June 2020

Deep horizon and the blue Firmament made a thin veil, Under my heavy mind My soul is lost.

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Srijan Mondal 25 June 2020

The celebration of spring and autumn was Synchronous, Summer was giving way to eternal spring...///

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Srijan Mondal 25 June 2020

Only the flame of worship was not there, The Sun was above the sky, With chirping of birds spring was in celebration

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Srijan Mondal 25 June 2020

Bough of your flowers was ready, Only the conch was not present, The air that blows through forest stopped blowing, ..//

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Prabir Kumar 25 June 2020

The bough of my being with Fragrant flowers was not in order, My stupid mind was insipid and under the grip of deep slumber.

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Shreya Ghosh 25 June 2020

All the songs of life, sweet and sour, bitter and cordial, Nuptial and Requiescat, Unto Your feet were offered, Only the flame of worship was not there, The Sun was above the sky, With chirping of birds spring was in celebration

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Shreya Ghosh 25 June 2020

Your alter was not decorated with sweet fragrance as incense was not prepared, The light was lit with incense bearing azimuth, The world was sleepy with buzzing bees, The warm days with warm flow of life

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Shreya Ghosh 25 June 2020

Upon my awakening I found myself nowhere, Everywhere You have gone through rain, air and sky, Deep horizon and the blue Firmament made a thin veil, Under my heavy mind My soul is lost.///

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Biswajit Roy 25 June 2020

Bough of your flowers was ready, Only the conch was not present, The air that blows through forest stopped blowing, The day was good Yet dreary.

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Prabir Gayen 24 June 2020

Deep horizon and the blue Firmament made a thin veil, Under my heavy mind My soul is lost.

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Mahtab Bangalee 24 June 2020

All the songs of life, sweet and sour, bitter and cordial, Nuptial and Requiescat, Unto Your feet were offered, Only the flame of worship was not there, The Sun was above the sky, With chirping of birds spring was in cel.....excellent poem penned

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Varsha M 24 June 2020

Under my heavy mind my soul is lost. Very good words. You came as a sweet dream... beautiful imagery. Good work

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