Monday, September 26, 2005

With My Beloved Comments

Rating: 5.0

I pray with my beloved
She is the moon in whom I disappear
Men of evil may kill her
And the beauty of her children
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Frank Bana
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Ruby Root 05 July 2006

Wow, Such an intense and strong poem. You write with some anger and bitterness for what ever cause. You have a great belief and that is really ok. We should stand up for what we believe in. Hopefully you will not need to fight. Your poem was written with great emotions, vivid imagery and good form. Take care.

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Dee Daffodil 15 May 2006

I'm thinking that you're beloved is not a woman...but a Country perhaps... Well done! Dee

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