Wednesday, October 14, 2015

With Me. Comments

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Tears, shards of glass escape from my eyes.
The lump in my throat, a butcher's blade.
Pain I feel
because of the love forbade.
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Barbara Clafton
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Dr Antony Theodore 20 December 2015

Leave her and come to me. Let my heart be where it wants to be. conveying your deep pain and distress in words. very nice poem. thank you. tony

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Barbara Clafton 21 August 2018

many thanks x

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Khairul Ahsan 04 November 2015

'With whose heart beats and pumps idiosyncratically' - This is a wonderful expression.

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Barbara Clafton 05 November 2015

thank you x

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