With Love's Offer Comments

A very nice poem but somehow the language seems a little awkward: so daring to eat a peach I suggest: When petals open you will find a need to get involved where problems may be managed in a lovely manner with love's offering. But this doesn't imply you need stop creating, or even heed my comment, for the poem has a touching message, and love has its own language. Panmelys happy new year.

When opens petals You will find Let it get involved And problem be easily solved In lovely manner With love's offer