Friday, October 16, 2009

With In Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

Scarlet lips as red as a rose,
perfect hips in a seductive pose.
On the outside this is what I may be,
but what about looking at the heart within me.
...
Read full text

joseph macquarrie
COMMENTS
Shannon Monroe 14 January 2010

i love it.... it's exciting and it make me think of someone special and dear 2 me.... thank you...

0 0 Reply
wild forest- E- 12 January 2010

good one! ! ! like...... definataly is a modivational peom for othere people not to look on the outside, but on the inside. keep up the great work! !

0 0 Reply

this one is really good really creative. well done

0 0 Reply
red rose of texas 15 December 2009

very good i like it and don't give up you will find someone

0 0 Reply
Rachel Butler 29 October 2009

'But all I really want is for you to see' Rachel Ann Butler

0 0 Reply
joseph macquarrie

joseph macquarrie

milwakee wisconsin
Close
Error Success