Thursday, March 4, 2010

With Her Love/Without Her Love Comments

Rating: 4.5

She was my lover
And I was her saint
And we said I love you
Until our voices were faint
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Robbie Squires
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Tyler Joseph 04 March 2010

I like this poem. Nice incorporation of rhyming while sending a strong message. I recently wrote one like this to. I'm also a student in high school.

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Alvin Wien 04 March 2010

A nice focus after you're dumped.

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Robbie Squires

Robbie Squires

Akron, Ohio
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