The gentle breezes,
that blow warm in you hair,
is of the whispering winds of the words,
of my passion,
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Randy, Thanks for the invitation to read some of your poems. I enjoyed this one and will read a few more while I''m here.
wow! ! what a beautiful write randy........thought i read it before i am back for more.........just keep on writing....
And from there I wish to never be set free, from the arms of my-Angel! Love... ------- Your words captivate me, touching and sweet you managed to have a great image here, too Poetically, well penned................10
Words written from a truly romantic and poetic mind - this is a fine warm verse Randy with well chosen metaphors with appeal from the heart.... - and a sure 10 - - from Fay....
sweet! full of warmth and love! wow! just wow! not this wow but a BIG WOW! WOoOW!
very refreshing to know a man can have such gentle and genuine thoughts of his love...great poem..very enjoyable
What a lovely poem and expressed in a gentle way. Well penned. with motherly love. You must go further and write more.
Wowwwwwww! ! ! ! ! Randy no cold steel fence Randy the warmest of all Who wont feel warm in your gentle arms Thou art an angel sent from above With a heart full of warmth and love for all so heart wrenching that I was forced to write this -10 anjali
A swaying piece you can become lost in whilst reading...very tender poem
a beautifuul and passionate poem sir...some lines were just outstanding...10
I'm man, I'm beast, No cold steel fence can hold me; but near to you I am weak, I'm only bound by warm gentle arms.................Lovely lines.........Shackles of love are strongest.....10+++
hmmmm, what a very passionate write you have here, my friend..Love it