With Folded Hands Comments

The poem gets 10/10 from me too, among other 10 voters who rated this poem with the maximum value.

It's a nice poem of solemn prayers which I believe God Almighty wiould be happy to respond to. 'Forgive me, when from the righteous path I stray When I am left groping in the dark, Lead me to virtue's bright and sunny way.' - Loved these beautiful lines the most.

Lead me to land where wisdom reigns Transform me through love's mystic power Oh Lord make my heart your living cathedral....... pure devotional prayer setting aside the heart for the Lord to reside. Beautiful....10

Thank you for this glimpse in your beautiful soul. I don't think I have the words to communicate to you what an awesome prayer of thanksgiving this is. You have indeed shared the good news with this extraordinary piece! 10 million stars and onto my fav list!

Exceptionally well crafted Valsa, the rhythm, the tone and the emotional resonance all convey depth and skill. Not only the but your faith in a power comes crystal clear, you give yourself so completely and unselfishly to something higher, and its a beautiful to read. The teachings of Christ still resonate, to forgive those who hurt is the most higher human calling their is. Peace be unto you.10+

This is a great prayer poem excellently penned on occasion of Good Friday and this poem is full of trust and devotion. This expresses your tender heart and great personality. The prayer of freedom God accepts which we sing before Holy Cross. He fives us freedom and love too. With bright virtue he allows us to lead and gain values of his wisdom. This is a great poem beautifully penned. This is of course an outstanding poem. Thank you very much for sharing this...10

Lead me to a land where wisdom reigns Transform me through love's mystic power Oh Lord, make my heart, your living cathedral And bathe me in your grace's incessant shower! A heart rending prayer full of devotion and love for God.......10

Oh Lord, make my heart, your living cathedral And bathe me in your grace's incessant shower! .. A powerful prayer straight from heart, and still with tonnes of poetic art.

Bathe me in your grace's incessant shower. We submit to Him to receive His love.

Powerful prayer, not only on Good Friday, but every day this prayer poem suffices. I have enjoyed very much reading this excellent write. A humbling prayer from deep within. Thank you so much for sharing. God´s Blessings in Abundance for you and your beloved family. Amen.

valsa, you remind me of his words that strike me, that he prayed despite the jealousy, spite, cruelty, murderousness, and greed for power unleased on him—" forgive them, for they don't know what they're doing." may we be able to do the same. may we have the perspective to know where those who crucified him did not. -glen

I liked the title of this poem. So apt for the occasion and so humbling All the five stanzas in this.prayer are.very well executed. and crafted showing different situations wherein we need the powerful intercession of the Lord Almighty. Superbly penned.10++.and onto.my Poem List.

A powerful and encompassing prayer not only on Good Friday but everyday. A prayer helps us develop relationship with God.It is a way to align ourselves with God's will and consequently find peace in life. This great prayer helps us find direction and peace in life.

This poem represents everyone's prayer...this is what we all want and we pray for...indeed a good prayer in humble submission- -may that Almighty shower His mercy on us all-10++++ Thank you Valsa for all your comments on my poems...A very Happy Easter To You

A lovely Easter poem that reflects love in faith...beautiful.

Beautiful prayer Valsa. Prayer is what leads us to peace. Wish you a very happy Easter. Let peace prevail in our hearts. Let light of love shine through all hearts.

great humble praying to God; Love it

Lead me to a land where wisdom reigns Transform me through love's mystic power Oh Lord, make my heart, your living cathedral And bathe me in your grace's incessant shower! Excellent prayer, dear Valsa, on the occasion of Good Friday....A 100 for this poem. Remain blessed!

In the occasion of Good Friday this mavelous poem has been written by you as a prayer to Lord Jesus who forgave those who mercilessly tortured him. You wish him to lead you in righteous path and not to fall into Satan's deceitful snare. This prayer isn't only meant for you but it is also meant for all. A great work.10

Hope, your 800th Poem will turn out to be a master piece! Congratulations in advance!