Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Friday, January 31, 2014

With Fear Comments

Rating: 5.0

I shivered with fear
As death bell rang to ears
“Come on, pack your luggage”
You are now off the age
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 February 2014

Negative Sabrina Manitowabi2 hours ago It is confusing.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 February 2014

Feelings of strength when there is imagination of death close to one's life Umesh Upadhyaya1 hour ago very nice, also the style of presentation and fine control of emotions. Comment 0

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 February 2014

I liked it Daniel Cuellar2 hours ago I really appreciated the visual imagery here. Although I had to read it several times to truly understand it. It is a little confusing, and there are a few typos, but nice job

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 January 2014

Gibz Rising likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 January 2014

Lovely Rose HolmesLess than a minute ago Lovely words strung together, Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 January 2014

Wow.... Karen HabermehlLess than a minute ago its.... The way, I write

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 January 2014

I shivered with fear As death bell rang to ears

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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