I shivered with fear
As death bell rang to ears
“Come on, pack your luggage”
You are now off the age
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Feelings of strength when there is imagination of death close to one's life Umesh Upadhyaya1 hour ago very nice, also the style of presentation and fine control of emotions. Comment 0
I liked it Daniel Cuellar2 hours ago I really appreciated the visual imagery here. Although I had to read it several times to truly understand it. It is a little confusing, and there are a few typos, but nice job
Gibz Rising likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1
Lovely Rose HolmesLess than a minute ago Lovely words strung together, Comment +1
Wow.... Karen HabermehlLess than a minute ago its.... The way, I write
Negative Sabrina Manitowabi2 hours ago It is confusing.