Thursday, September 14, 2017

With Every Sunrise Comments

Rating: 5.0

Many a trampled flowers
lie
in the wilderness of man's
inhumanity
...
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Nosheen Irfan
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Sandra Feldman 10 November 2022

Simply devine! Uplifting and so fine.A perfect gem of a poem that fills the soul as well as the mind. Loved it. Thank you!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 10 November 2022

Beautiful poem especially the last line

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 November 2022

A beautiful poem. I agree with you what you express from the core of your heart, , 'but with every sunrise glows a new rose'. This is another gem of your poems.

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Susan Williams 03 December 2017

So gentle. Your poetry carries overtones of emotion- not over-blown emotion but gentle yet truthful. Well-done, a poem to treasure! 10

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 31 October 2017

Yes. A very beautiful poem of hope which all perturbed minds in pain would find solace in. (10)

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Barry Middleton 21 September 2017

Lovely and hopeful. I wish I could feel optimistic about the world but I don't.

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Geetha Jayakumar 19 September 2017

Beautiful poem filling the freshness of the day. A new day is born with fresh hope. Loved reading it.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 19 September 2017

Wow beautifully rendered in freeverse style, superb metaphorical usage. Alluding to trampled lives, yet new hopes bud n born. Fabulous poetry. Kudos. Pls do leave your thoughts comment on my latest poem too, titled, 'To stand tall and proud yet to humbly bow'

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Valsa George 17 September 2017

When many a flower withers, another set of fresh ones bloom giving delight and making us forget what we have lost. This makes life a renewable experience.....! This also helps us recuperate! Otherwise life would have been an ordeal! Beautiful write full of sunshine!

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Anil Kumar Panda 16 September 2017

Beautiful poetry. Smooth sailing with a touch of grace. Loved it. seeks our arms- -tired from carrying pain and lies to come, embrace it wholeheartedly as you would hug the summer rain. ...is very nice.

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Muhammad Ali 16 September 2017

a circle. what is bad or ugly in nature, everything is natural. it is a weird game, we are rotating and revolving and going on, we are being played, or trapped in a playful boundary, until switching off. very soft flow and nice poem

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 September 2017

It is a beautiful philosophical poem on life and nature having haunting expression. The most impressive lines are... Many a trampled flowers lie in the wilderness of man's inhumanity but with every sunrise glows a new rose dazzling the eye with beauty, Thanks for sharing this meaningful poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 15 September 2017

Mani going on turning beauty in ugliness and nature even then blossoming new flowers of beauty. Man may become frustrated of nature but nature is still hopeful with the men. A great poem.

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Siddartha Montik 14 September 2017

Good narration about Hope! 10+++++!

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Bharati Nayak 14 September 2017

Many a trampled flowers lie in the wilderness of man's inhumanity but with every sunrise glows a new rose dazzling the eye with beauty, so shy unfolding its petals to set free its fragrance and life once again seeks our arms- -tired from carrying pain and lies to come, embrace it wholeheartedly as you would hug the summer rain. - - - - - I am in awe of this lovely poem.Thank you Nosheen for sharing.

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Shakil Ahmed 14 September 2017

Nosheen, again you have penned a marvelous poem, thanks a lot for sharing such a beautiful poem

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Nosheen Irfan

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