Tuesday, April 14, 2009

With Enchanter Comments

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It was not raining but sky was a big cloud
I heard my name and looked into the crowd
Saw you right there...waving in purple and blue
Agone, we wished to be each other's shroud.
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Dhanesh (trying to be) poet
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J. P. Dullahan 15 April 2009

An enchanting lyric - good writes: -) .

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Neha Aradhye 15 April 2009

u rocked with this ingenious work....

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Reshma Ramesh 14 April 2009

wow! ! beautiful...magical.....loved it! !

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Vinod Kumar 14 April 2009

Real common fact happened in the present nice expression of the agony and care like it, thanks for sharing,10+

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Mandar Madhav 14 April 2009

hae nice poem i like 1st & 3rd stanja

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Fiona Davidson 14 April 2009

Excellent write Dhanesh...10++

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