Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Friday, July 5, 2013

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Leave at once
The place
Where you are
Insulted often here
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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First stanza was great, but... Madison Bartholow9 minutes ago It's hard to follow. I think the more you read it, the more interesting it becomes. but the second to last stanza didn't really rhyme while the rest did and otherwise didn't really seem to fit with the rest. I like it though, it's charming.

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good Shakil Ahmed BaliyaviLess than a minute ago good Comment +1 good

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Sajad WaniLess than a minute ago ok

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Leave at once The place Where you are Insulted often here

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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