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This is a nice little free form poem, but I felt in the third stanza using the word 'reach' twice in succession as an end of line rhyme spoils it for me. Other than than that you have a natural ability for rhyme. Well done.

Rohani Daud likes this. Rohani Daud Beautiful poem..love it.. 7 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

E.J Marshall1 minute ago just seemed like you were trying too hard to rhyme Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago it comes easy way to me.. no hard or soft. it is my way

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