With And Without You... Comments

A lovable life brings spring in love's core that you perceive in amazement. A canvas without painting does not look good and life without love becomes meaningless. We have to carry and share love. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned...10

Nice work. With and without is full of simile.

Two contrast nicely threaded together.

A well penned poem. Simply lovely ......10+++

Black and white shades of life. So beautifully written. One more heart warming poem from your pen.10++

It's so beautiful and heart touching poem about " YOU" . Thank you for sharing Sir. तुम मेरा ख्वाब हो " वो ख्वाब" जिसे मैं हमेशा सहज कर रखना चाहता हूं " वो ख्वाब" जिसमे तुम्हारा एहसास हो वो ख्वाब" जिसमें तुमसे ही मेरी जिंदगी का बनता किस्सा हो और वो मेरी जिंदगी का एक अहम हिस्सा हो Rated 10+++++ and five star