With And Without You... Poem by M. Asim Nehal

With And Without You...

Rating: 5.0


Life with you is like
A dream come true
A spring with the breeze
A flowing river.

Life without you is like
A canvas without painting
A sea without the waves
A night without the moon

Wednesday, July 22, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life,realistic
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sharad Bhatia 22 July 2020

It's so beautiful and heart touching poem about " YOU" . Thank you for sharing Sir. तुम मेरा ख्वाब हो " वो ख्वाब" जिसे मैं हमेशा सहज कर रखना चाहता हूं " वो ख्वाब" जिसमे तुम्हारा एहसास हो वो ख्वाब" जिसमें तुमसे ही मेरी जिंदगी का बनता किस्सा हो और वो मेरी जिंदगी का एक अहम हिस्सा हो Rated 10+++++ and five star

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 July 2020

A lovable life brings spring in love's core that you perceive in amazement. A canvas without painting does not look good and life without love becomes meaningless. We have to carry and share love. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned...10

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T Rajan Evol 22 July 2020

Nice work. With and without is full of simile.

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Deepak S S 22 July 2020

Two contrast nicely threaded together.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 July 2020

A well penned poem. Simply lovely ......10+++

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Aarzoo Mehek 22 July 2020

Black and white shades of life. So beautifully written. One more heart warming poem from your pen.10++

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