With All This Smoke, It's Hard To Breathe Comments

This is really good. It's kinda like how I was a few months ago.

I really like the last line 'tombstone marked with the word Yes'. It shows the struggle between the heart and the mind: The rational mind is telling you it will kill, but the heart wants to go back. Nice work.

very smoooth! not anxious like a song

You have expressed your fellings very well.

There's always that one person who reduces us to this and it's so hard to break away, and what's harder is knowing that, even in the midst of your determination to leave, you will return at some point. You capture this so well. I really enjoyed it!