Standing in an open field
Drenched by the rain with only a cap to shield
My whole body shivered, remembering the past
A vivid encounter, hopefully will not last
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Sweet and beautiful piece... as if your gentle heart touches mine. =)
oh my gosh, , , oh my gosh...oh my gosh........wait, , , wait......allow me first to borrow some words dear..........HAZEM AL, i will borrow your words ha...i just want to use those words to express what ive felt in meggies work....... SPEECHLESS I AM.....AS IF CAT ATE MY TONGUE...AS IF MY PEN STOP TEARING......my gosh.........the poem is so sweet, , , its not a romantic, but it is very sweet......uhum......i love the way you express the sweetness u offer to ur lover.....if i could only have wings, , , , ....my gosh.....well, .......just for u to reach him my dear, i'll give you not my wings but the prayers for you to be together again.......actually, i want to cry while reading this poem.....all words are well written......cheers.......
wow...powerful and very endearing verses... sweet...sweet...sweet.... verses of love and protection..... hmmm.....you are the wind beneath my wings..hehehehe
Another nice piece on deep love. 10 for this romantic composition.