With A Smile (Happy) Comments

This is a beautiful work River, I think this is one of the nices things Ive read by you, which really really makes me feel happy. for every tear you shed, smile before and after each fell. Can you call Hallmark and get that printed?

Your diction is simple. My friend likes it. He applaud your efford. Keep it up. The friend of mine who asked me to leave this comment is by namd peace wakama.

Wonderful its a very courageous write, with lots of warmed and potent advice, I really admire it so much, it came and touch my emotions, great poem there! The_African_Son