With A Hole In His Pocket ~ Comments

Humorous poem on 'Hole'. I liked it.

Maybe it was better that I did NOT tell the guy, before his 'discovered' 'the joy and wonder that accompany each flight.', ...that he COULD find a better pocket for his bus money. : ) bri

Your rhyming may have improved, and, where you did NOT rhyme, I found your choices quite fine.

TO MY FAVORITES, and I'd give five HUGE stars, but I'll save them and perhaps vote them...when I return from my voyage to and from my birthplace: Mars. bri : )

It is often a difficult lesson to learn, that riches do not guarantee happiness. An awesome poem.

Beautifully presented, entertaining and a lesson imparted, factors that will make a great poem. To my favorites.

Amusing story woven and crafted brilliantly into a magnificent poem. Liked the meaningful message embedded in this write. A great thought to ponder about and apply the same in our life's journey