Tuesday, June 13, 2017

With A Bleeding Heart Comments

Rating: 4.5

Just like a star shining ever brighter till the full light of day
You stole my life, joy and happiness then helplessly left me wandering
Often I feel the touch of your arms around my heart
A conjuring touch that gives hope and promise
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Adolf Baloyi
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Duncan Ramashitja 22 August 2017

wow this is beautiful, immaculate, sensational.... I love it, I love it. I love

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Tebogo Mojapelo 23 June 2017

I am really stunned, this is a beautiful poem with a very wonderful flow. The emotions are portrayed so brilliantly. Thank you Adolf

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 June 2017

Often I feel the touch of your arms around my heart I missed the distinctive odor in your hair the sweetness of your lips the brightness into those innocent eyes my treasure, my soul and yes my heartbeat Disarmed and vulnerable as I am begging for your love back. These are the points i collected from your poem after reading it carefully. Thank you very much for your poem. A great wonderful poem. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 19 June 2017

No loss in love. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks.

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Mazwi Sedibe 14 June 2017

Wow, Love lost is regained in poetry thank you for this piece bra

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Chinedu Dike 13 June 2017

A very passionate piece of poetry - well articulated and elegantly brought forth from inner recesses of the heart with conviction. It touched my heart. Thanks for sharing Adolf.

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Adolf Baloyi 14 June 2017

You're welcome

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