Witches Dances Comments
(dedicated to Thelma Zaracostas)
I don’t want to lose you
Even so you always
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I find out that this is a very good poem. But restrain all to me by my chineses language barrels, i am detered to know them fully. I did try my best cause there are difference in cultures. My english is not good. Popper names are queer
A passionate piece providing a world voyage of feelings, actions, and supplications. I like this line, “Let’s together chase chances” for its originality. I like the musical matches, but, to my sorrow, I am not familiar enough with all of them to appreciate their full implications. A great piece for music lovers of the classical kind.
Lots of thought went into this poem, very nice... kind regards, Kathleen
Astonishing and very very real, , flying on the fantasy, , , , , , , i loved reading it, , , you have such extraordinary knowledge of the subject, , , , , , , a 10
Excellant idea and theme for a poem. Dear read it repeatedly for further editing.Use only 100 words to say 2000 words. Thatis the job of a poem.poetry lives in silence not in noise.
Ahmed! Kudos to your skills of writing. All the 3 pieces I read today are so musical, heavenly...u are gifted poet.
very eloquent- music enriches and nourishes our life as does your poetry.10
nice poem. i like that way about feeling, hopeless, angry, lost, and empty. and your words about cities, , , , good work....
Very dramatic. What would life be without the romance of music? Ten for your eloquence. Kind regards, Sandra
LETS TOGETHER BEGIN STEPS........ excellent and catchy. i enjoy your poems well done! !
Having heard most of the thrilling music you mentioned in this awesome poem, Ahmad, your words sang with the rhythms of this incomparable music. It is a marvellous write and paints vivid pictures in the mind of it's readers everywhere. Carl.
You have a begging picturesque of all the beautiful places with song and dance tempo...beautifully written. a 10.
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7/24/2025 6:27:29 PM # 1.0.0
a novel composition with an equally novel theme