Saturday, November 11, 2017

Wisp Comments

Rating: 5.0

He stood in the garden.
Looking deeply into two eyes.
Blue as the skies.
She lights a cigarette.
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Lamar Cole
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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 November 2017

Love generates from blue eyes and wisp of smoke from cigar. So nicely and hauntingly you have inscribed this poem, dear Lamer, thank u for sharing.10

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Mathew Loniare 11 November 2017

Very nice and interesting poem~!

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Rini Shibu 11 November 2017

Beautiful poem about two lovers

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