Tuesday, September 19, 2006

Wising Up Sophia Comments

Rating: 5.0

When the game was nearly over,
Sophia threw in the hand;
The old man laughed, incontinently:
Such a dirty, dirty man.
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Will Barber
COMMENTS
Ann Beard 03 March 2008

You paint an amusing picture. Excellent.

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Zen Bojczuk 12 June 2007

You have so many good poems Will. Zen

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Not a member No 4 03 February 2007

Sounds like a bad loser! Did she know the rules? Wisdom comes slowly anyway if it comes at all. A provocative and poetic poser on how we get it Will! jim

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Duncan Wyllie 11 December 2006

Stay well clear of the gambling board seems to be the message in this one, I too would like to second that opinion Will Thankyou Love duncan X

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Melvina Germain 19 November 2006

A big lesson learned, the message is clear, wonderful write Will-Melvina-

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Esther Leclerc 02 October 2006

This poem leaves one wanting to know more about the players... Yes, perspective is all. An atmospheric piece, Sir Will of Barbery! Esther : ]

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Sandra Fowler 20 September 2006

Provocative, original and very amusing too. What fun, Will.! Warm regards, Sandra

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gone gone 20 September 2006

A fine poem...illustrating how wisdom Depends on one's perspective......I like it Love, D.

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Tailor Bell 19 September 2006

couldn't remember my prior comment...but this is one of my favorites, Will. some lessons are only learned through experience. a cheeky fun verse. top notch. -Tailor

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