Sunday, June 29, 2014

Wishing You Comments

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In the bright sky, see the evil ends
The god too know, it is the day of my friend
See the rashes in the sky come and go
May the rainbow come in your life with colors to blow..! ! !
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John Sam 29 June 2014

Excellent writing, a very sweet poem with good rhyming scheme I really felt joy when I read this poem I too was surprised by the lines that just depict hyperbole I want to know more about you so please just throw me a message, I will be waiting for that. once again thank you for sharing such wonderful lines with us

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Bohari Mohammad

Bohari Mohammad

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