Tuesday, June 21, 2011

Wishing We Could Have Stayed Comments

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I close my eyes to see it all again,
Standing in a place we’ve never been.
You move closer as I put my hands on your face,
We kiss as your arms tighten around my waist.
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Keli Mims
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 21 June 2011

Great poem. Nice sentiments. Well crafted.10 kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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