Tuesday, March 15, 2005

Wishing The Impossible Comments

Rating: 5.0

Midnights gaze on distant skies,
A wish that can't come true.
Sunken ships long empty shores,
A heart that's broke in two.
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william mae
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Ivy Christou 15 March 2005

This is a great poem William, it has such a beautiful verses. I especially like 'A dying roses last attempt, To grasp the mornings sun.' It is such a moving image.. Well done HBH

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Shraddha Kinger 15 March 2005

Ok... i review again: P..... loved this one...beautifully penned.... gr8 work! ! !

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