Friday, August 2, 2013

Wishing In Vain Comments

Rating: 4.9

How I wish my poems could,
Soar higher and higher
Like a bird of limitless wingspan,
Darting into horizons far!
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Valsa George
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 June 2019

You are one of the finest Poets on this site. Your poems can soar the heavens above. Most of your poems that I have read have been beautifully crafted and executed. A wonderful poem excellently penned, as always. Liked reading this write. So humbling.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 July 2016

Like an inspired artist. Nice piece of work.

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Loke Kok Yee 22 October 2015

Your poems have reach the stars and back and on the way you have shown many the right way truly now you are sitting among the top of the stack and there you will forever stay Thanks Valsa-10+++

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Brian Stafford 23 April 2015

congrats on poem, and getting poem of the day!

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Kim Barney 23 April 2015

Very well done. I have no regrets for including you in my poem POETRY HEAVEN.

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Khalid Saifullah 11 January 2015

Like the lyrics of a half forgotten melody My poems delight me In my sequestered hours of loneliness! A beautiful poem....................10

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Saheb Mohapatra 08 November 2014

great poem mam..............................your thinking skills are quite nice................i love your style of writing......................thanks.

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Bernard Snyder 19 September 2014

The way you mix every day life with nature is truly amazing! Again, nice poem! I gave a 10'.

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Amitava Sur 03 July 2014

Beautiful wishes are expressed here of seeing her own poems to reach a greater heights.So far my knowledge goes it says that to reach any goal first you need to dream rightly. Hence the initiation is done and one day your poems with your mastery will reach to those dizzy heights also.

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Akhtar Jawad 12 June 2014

Your poems are nice, but the desire to write more beautiful poems is something positive.

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Tadasha Tripathy 22 May 2014

The unlimited sky is open here to fly away with poems. I liked reading this poem. Thanks.

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Tadasha Tripathy 22 May 2014

The unlimited sky is open here to fly away with poems. I liked reading this poem. Thanks.

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Tadasha Tripathy 22 May 2014

The unlimited sky is open here to fly away with poems. I liked reading this poem. Thanks.

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Walterrean Salley 10 August 2013

This piece speaks for all of us. It has such a beautiful feeling to it. I love and enjoyed it Valsa.

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Patricia Grantham 09 August 2013

A very noble poem written by a person of great nobility. The essence that you portray in your poems probably does not even come close to the individual that you really are. You are a humble and very sincere individual and you portray this in some of your writings. Your thoughts have climbed above the mountains, transcends across the oceans, plunged to the deepest valleys and then lights upon the readers heart. Truly another magnificent write and very worthy of all merits given.

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Valsa George 06 August 2013

Hmmm.... This comment has the rhythm of falling rain and is no less than a wonderful poem and its verse filters through the sinews of my heart and is pumped up to be frozen as a stratum in the sedimentary rock of my memory, never to be erased! THANK you DANNY.....! !

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Danny Draper 06 August 2013

This beautiful and modestly self deprecating poem has reached Australia and is respectfully and greatfully appreciated for its beauty and lyric. I hope one day to find a poem printed on a paper boat that was swept by deluge from a muddy puddle, flused down a swollen river to the sea and journeyed to a far far beach where I may find it disheveled but crested on the transient sand that has it firmly til I reach it and unwrap its gentle gift o' sailed verse.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 05 August 2013

You are already soaring in the skies with your beautiful and marvellous poems. It is always good to yearn for better and better positions in the world of poetry. Your poems delight us too in our sequestered hour of lonliness. May God bless you dear Valsa!

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Hazel Durham 05 August 2013

Your poems soar with such beauty and eloquence across skies so clear with your great passion and understanding of human nature that flourishes in every season. Thank you for sharing!

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Shahzia Batool 04 August 2013

what is wished for here it has already been achieved by your poems...you have a distinct style of writing poems, and i do not only read but study your poems...all lines substantial! ! !

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