Glaedr the poet

Glaedr the poet

Born in California but my 'Homeland' will always be Missouri
Monday, July 16, 2007

Wishing I Was A Songbird Comments

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I wish I could be a songbird
but not just to gracefully fly
for in the morning, emotions stirred
I would sing my song to the sky
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Adeline Foster 07 June 2011

Glaedr: You do a great job! This is another wonderful effort and, believe me I am qualified to know. May I point out one small flaw. Since there is only one sun, one cannot fly amongst it. Perhaps you meant to say 'beyond the sun'. Great job anyway. Adeline

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Glaedr the poet

Glaedr the poet

Born in California but my 'Homeland' will always be Missouri
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