****wishing He Would Stop The Pain He Is Causing Me **** Comments

You may not think it Aurora and Cordelia but deep down he will always love you no matter what you think

Wow very impressive i could feel the pain and the sorrow from start to finish. man it was great i felt so many feelings at once. Regret, hate, love and many more it was good. Keep it up.

there was a rich man could not find peace carried all his wealth in a bag as gold and precious stones and reached a saint told the saint that he could not fine peace in the world the saint did not listen he just opened the bag and after seeing the valuables started running with the bag seeing this the rich man chased him like anything finally the saint reached the same tree rich man also reached then the saint handed over the bag to him back the rich man felt very happy now the saint declared ' the bag with valuables was there sometime back also; that time you did not feel happy now same bag is with you; you feel happy; so happiness is not inside the bag....its inside you ............................................................. pain and pleasure are mind made...have a happy mind....well written try to choose subtler subjects to write poem..

I agree completely with Adam reed... I did really enjoy reading this poem it was a good poem rom start to finish, keep on writing

Poem full of expression born out of emotional turmoil. Bold write. Well done! ; D

i love this so much. its very strong. lots of feeling. keep up the great work :)

daaaannng you reallh i could say let loose with that one. nice guys feel the same way about girls. you need to find a nice guy :) . oh yeah and this was an excellent poem. i can feel the inner conflict of hate and love. nice one!