Sunday, June 17, 2012

Wishing And Willing.. Comments

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When the baby kicks in the womb,
A few parents touch to have the kick,
Most mothers excited, while the fathers too,
A few miss this opportunity as not bothered to,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Dr.subhendu Kar 23 June 2012

The crying of babies never fails to wake up the mother, The crying of mothers never fails to shaken up the children..... love filial uplifts to uphold gleams of light as red reflexes yet rejoicing by resonance.........beautiful write with mellowed voice,10++, thanks for sharing

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Spiritual Seeker 22 June 2012

I had lost both parents, my mother about 2 years ago. Now I regretted not to hav seen her face often when she was alife. Great write...thanks for sharing! A great 10.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 19 June 2012

Yes, Hans VR, the exceptions are painful to see, particularly, when the mothers and fathers are neglected in their old age, but I wrote this poem for the lonely married / divorced men whose children did not wish them on Father's day. Thank you for the comments..

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Hans Vr 19 June 2012

Nice poem, Veeraiyah. The love between children and parents, so lovely expressed But nothing is never, nothing is always. The exceptions are painful to see

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