Tuesday, September 25, 2012

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Aivilo Gnuoy
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Bri Edwards 24 January 2013

in the comment by Yoonoos, below, i hope he/she means few words, where i just read few. that makes sense to me. Aivilo, i read your poem and at first did not follow it the way i believe you wrote it. now i think i understand that the last two lines ARE the wish. maybe the capital letter at start of third line threw me off. i usually don't leave capitals at the start of all my lines. i don't think that is a requirement of a poem. i wonder what is the significance of the capital Y on You'll? thanks for sharing. i like it.

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