Sunday, August 31, 2008

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Words float in the sky
Soul put a sad smile
Heart gave a painful cry
Tears drop'd from
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Asif Baloch
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*Trusting You* 06 December 2008

Thoughts of lonliness are eating me alive great lines... that is why I cant be alone... it eats me alive to no end. great job. Becca

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Ashraful Musaddeq 19 October 2008

'Thoughts of lonliness are eating me alive Wishing for death but could not die' Another poem that touches inside. Feeling gloomy.

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