Saturday, July 13, 2013

Wishful Thinking Comments

Rating: 5.0

I woke up this morning,
Couldn't stop yawning!
Reality, entered my head,
I had this idea,
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 November 2022

I need to express my feelings for which I take a pen....I do the same dear poetess. I love this excellent poem.

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Jayne Louise Davies 15 November 2022

Thank you Dillip x Appreciate your comments x

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Jayne Davies 13 July 2013

Thanks! So glad you like it!

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 13 July 2013

a vivid portrayal of the state when the mind is unburdened of its load of thoughts. great write Jayne.

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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