Tuesday, December 4, 2012

Wishes Cried For Wanted Child! Comments

Rating: 4.5

The wishes that are washed in tears
Are for a pitied child
Who knows no love and warmth of heart
I wish this reconciled
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Stevie Taite
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Owain Glyn 10 January 2013

It is something of an anachronism that sometimes those with the least ability to love their children breed the most.

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Alla Simone 14 December 2012

Honest, straightforward expressions so well penned! Thanks for sharing. Fav lines: The wishes bathed in helpless brine. The wishes leaving salted trails.

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Jahan Zeb 12 December 2012

This poem proves you a female heart. Loving and sympathetic. This is a nice poem that describe three unlucky individuals. Nice Stevie

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 06 December 2012

A touching fab write. D childless n d overfertile like me both r in anguish indeed! D lil ironies of life in sweet rhyme with a sour tinge.

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Lyn Paul 06 December 2012

This is beautifully written and hard to accept this could still be like this in this century. Thank you

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Greg Davidson 05 December 2012

Beautiful thoughts expressed wonderfully well.

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Red O'mara 04 December 2012

Beautiful. Beautiful. Beautiful.

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Stevie Taite 04 December 2012

Inspired by a poem by Teigan Dakin!

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