Friday, June 24, 2011
Wishes Comments
Rating: ★4.7
She wished for a coat, you put your arms around her
She wished for a bracelet, you bound her
She wished for forever, you stayed on inside her
Just like you knew you would.
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir
24 June 2011
Outstanding poem. Wonderfully conceived. Great imagery with nice sentiments. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Akmal
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7/30/2025 4:53:01 PM # 1.0.0
The simplicity of the wonderful is all I can say. Great Poem, keep them coming.