Sunday, October 11, 2009

Wishes Comments

Rating: 4.5

If I can have sweet wishes
I wish to see you everyday
to look at your expressions and hear your voice
to see a wide smile at your face.
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akram awadat
COMMENTS
the Qween 25 May 2010

IT'S AN LOVELY POEM DEEP AND TOUCHING, BUT THERE IS SADENESS IN YOUR POEM LIKE YOU WONT TO DO SOMETHING BUT YOU CAN'T. BUT OTHER WAY IT'S LOVELY

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Sallie Howson 11 February 2010

simply beautiful :) .........

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Sandra Dodd 29 January 2010

Ah and a happy lady she must be! So sweetly done. Congratulations.

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Sasidharan Vellat Menon 23 December 2009

Love is the essence of life. Here u expressed well

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Akram Saqib 22 October 2009

ALAS! WISHES DO NO COME TRUE

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wow, she's so lucky! Wonderful, a heart rending piece! Thanks! best regards, jdh

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Luwi Habte 14 October 2009

ops! this is so nice romantic poem well done poet luwi

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 14 October 2009

a very sweet romantic poem....10

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Rachel Butler 13 October 2009

I wish to see you everyday Rachel Ann Butler

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Obinna Eruchie 13 October 2009

Your wish to have your love, the one who is far away from you, be nigh you by your side. Touching.

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Connie Tallada 12 October 2009

how could you be so mean inviting me to read your poem! it made me cry..geeeeeeeeeeeez... your wish is my wish.. but thats pretty impossible.. you see he is a soldier... (greatly penned, keep up the good work!)

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Prakash Mehra 12 October 2009

Nice piece of art. wonderful poem.

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Lalitha iyer 12 October 2009

If I can have sweet wishes I wish you could be somewhere far off enjoying life and laugh heartily and have a healthy glow...............nice wish Akram

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A lovely poem AKram with romantic images..well said..will visit again to vote as iam writing from mobile..

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Karla Bardanza 11 October 2009

This is a lovely poem sweet Akram! 10+ Karla B.

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Quin Faas 11 October 2009

sincere expression....

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Lady Grace 11 October 2009

this is a nice start dear..wish you will write more..this is nicely done dear akram...naizxenia

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HaZeM PaKKaR 11 October 2009

sweet words expressed sweet feelings.. Bravo, well done ! !

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