If I can have sweet wishes
I wish to see you everyday
to look at your expressions and hear your voice
to see a wide smile at your face.
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Ah and a happy lady she must be! So sweetly done. Congratulations.
Love is the essence of life. Here u expressed well
wow, she's so lucky! Wonderful, a heart rending piece! Thanks! best regards, jdh
Your wish to have your love, the one who is far away from you, be nigh you by your side. Touching.
how could you be so mean inviting me to read your poem! it made me cry..geeeeeeeeeeeez... your wish is my wish.. but thats pretty impossible.. you see he is a soldier... (greatly penned, keep up the good work!)
If I can have sweet wishes I wish you could be somewhere far off enjoying life and laugh heartily and have a healthy glow...............nice wish Akram
A lovely poem AKram with romantic images..well said..will visit again to vote as iam writing from mobile..
this is a nice start dear..wish you will write more..this is nicely done dear akram...naizxenia
IT'S AN LOVELY POEM DEEP AND TOUCHING, BUT THERE IS SADENESS IN YOUR POEM LIKE YOU WONT TO DO SOMETHING BUT YOU CAN'T. BUT OTHER WAY IT'S LOVELY