Saturday, July 4, 2009

Wishes Comments

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In the journey of life
I met so many characters
They were different and distinctive
They had wishes and desires
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Ency Bearis 15 July 2009

a good observation and to its true...and nicely written in poetic diction.....10

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In the journey of life I met so many characters They were different and distinctive They had wis......... lovely write..beautiful presentation.... u deserve..10 read mine.. anywhere, desire, , i am disgrace and you go away...

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Ejaz Khan 04 July 2009

Good observation, people, who cares about different kind of wealth are happier. A good write!

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Laurence Bourke 04 July 2009

a nicely done piece, i am in agreement with yoru observations and i was very into this poem! ! your message is one that we can all take something from and that is great! ! keep it up! !

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