Tuesday, August 21, 2018

Wishes Comments

Rating: 4.7

When love is lost the princess weeps
she ponders on her feet
what will make her happy
the prince she wants she cannot keep
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Aqua Flower
COMMENTS
Vanessa Hughes 23 March 2019

Lovely poem, this princess sounds quite depressed I think. Hope she realised there is more to life than having a prince. Good stuff x

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Aqua Flower 23 March 2019

Thank you for visiting. Although I sound quite depressed I'm not always this way. Losing something makes you sad. Depression is a chronic thing which I hope to never have I do have happiness in other aspects of my life. It would be enriched to have the love in my life to share it with. Again thanks for reading and commenting

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Carl Roussell 22 August 2018

There can be no rest in the loneliness she is feeling. The lines, she holds her cold heart as if it needs a jacket, are really good. A 10.

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Aqua Flower 23 August 2018

Thank you Carl. That image I thought was a good description of love lost. I'm glad you liked it.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 August 2018

Such a lovely fairy tale....10++++

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Aqua Flower 23 August 2018

Thank you for not for always reading my poems and for appreciating fairy tales.

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Rajnish Manga 21 August 2018

The anguish of the princess is quite moving. The poem looks like the part of a fairy tale with the reader asking for more. Thank you, Dear Poet.

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Aqua Flower 23 August 2018

Thank you for reading this poem. You have read the princesses anguish quite well. Love is sort of a fairytale that everyone wants to come true.

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