Wish You Were Dead Comments

So how come you didntblet a man die in 2013 ?

Wish you were dead..flashes deep mood of frustration received from a lover or loved ones, the poem is well organised, keep it up Rebacca

The twist in this poem is beautiful/ good write! !

This is very interesting. I like how you put a little twist in the end of the poem. I thought it was gonna go somewhere is when I first read the first couple of lines, but I love how you ended the poem.