Sunday, November 4, 2007

*wish*upon*a*star*-07 Comments

Rating: 3.2

Sitting outside
Wishing on a star
I wonder what you're doing
I wonder where you are
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Kishore Asthana 18 February 2009

Selena, Just read some of your poems. I liked them. I do hope you get over your writer's block soon.

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Alex Rios 20 March 2008

Wow! that was really good! I liked it! Keep up the writing! -Alex

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Chaotic Life - Curly M. 12 January 2008

I Love Your poem you are such a great poet and i have to admit you are better than me Curly

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Rosemary Dupree 18 November 2007

Such talent coming from someone so young.Your are truly blessed. I love your poem. Thanks for sharing. Rosemary

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Justine Keaton 10 November 2007

Awesome write, you are a really good poet. ~Justine~

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Jordan Erickson 07 November 2007

Its beautiful. I hope you find your perfect guy. He's out there some where under the stars thinking the exact same thing. Will he ever find you?

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An endearing, straighforward structure here. t x

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Anita Blake 07 November 2007

great write hun! ! just wait he will come your way.

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 05 November 2007

Awsome poem. Great work...

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Sandra Fowler 05 November 2007

Very nice. I used to wish on stars when I was your age. May all your dreams come true. Warm regards, Sandra

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Uloia Norris Moore 05 November 2007

A very moving and touching poem taken from your heart.Thank you for sharing that part.

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The Dreamers Movement 04 November 2007

Wow! ! ! I really really like it! ! ! Luv, TDM.

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Coreena Dejesus 04 November 2007

Beautiful poem keeping them coming!

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JUNIOR Haro 04 November 2007

very nice! Was only going to read 1 but reading this one ima check out the rest 8-)

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JUNIOR Haro 04 November 2007

very nice! Was only going to read 1 but reading this one ima check out the rest 8-)

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