Monday, September 8, 2008

* Wish To Meet Crossing Light Speed Comments

Rating: 4.8

The amazing scenerio-
Sweetheart's sleeping face!
Made faint sun-shine and moon-lit!
Crossing light speed we need soon meet!
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sarwar chowdhury
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Satarupa Rudrapal 15 October 2009

Hi Sarwar, amazing rhyming in all your poetry. Loved them.

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~ Jon London ~ 18 July 2009

The passion that floods the this wonderful imagery laced piece Sarwar is excellent my friend....so much feeling....outstanding poem 10+++ from me

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a very passionated poem..loved the speed of emotions inside..10++++

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Sw33t Girl 12 October 2008

fantastic imagery! and fabulous ideas!

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Vanessa Roman 15 September 2008

Very nice job on this. I give you much props for being able to write such a piece. : : Vanessa: :

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Ashraful Musaddeq 14 September 2008

A beautiful composition with nice imagery. My 10 with it.

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Martin Holm Sjölin 14 September 2008

Wow, I was really moved by this. Wish I could write something like this.

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Shalini Kts 14 September 2008

nice poem... a 10......

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Karina 13 September 2008

This poem is amazing... I love it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Seema Aarella 13 September 2008

So truely expressed.....ur lines do show the dimensions of ur feelings, its straight from heart and touches the heart. Enjoyed every line!

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Hana K 13 September 2008

wew.... you're genius! ! ! I dont really understand, really... but i have my reasons! 1) i dont have my dictinary right now 2) I dont have any experience with love 3) my IQ score is waaayyy too low to understand difficult things but i do understand i enjoy reading this thanks for offering :)

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Monika Marie 12 September 2008

Hmm..love at light speed...if only we could. Beautiful concept..beautiful imagery.

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Minnu Serah 12 September 2008

nice images, keep it up...

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Lylyanna Pilewski 11 September 2008

the feeling is conveyed quite clearly lovely poem

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Uriah Hamilton 11 September 2008

We are our mind more than anything else. We exist in a lonely thought.

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Linda Moore 11 September 2008

Mind can traverse the Universe and go where it wills. Very Nice......10

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Pipi Kaka 11 September 2008

i love this poem! x3

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Reshma Ramesh 11 September 2008

beautiful........i loved it

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Olumide Ayodele 11 September 2008

our wishes, riches, exceeds our grasp.wonderful theme.beautiful poem

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Priya Arora 11 September 2008

It's an amazing poem sarwar.. throught out poem is wonderful and i feel if i'll choose few lines to say that these are my favourite then that will not be justice to your poem as it's a wonderful expression of thoughts the way you present.. +++++++++10 For 'U' Regards, Priyaa Arora

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sarwar chowdhury

sarwar chowdhury

Origin- Bangladesh, Living abroad.
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