The amazing scenerio-
Sweetheart's sleeping face!
Made faint sun-shine and moon-lit!
Crossing light speed we need soon meet!
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The passion that floods the this wonderful imagery laced piece Sarwar is excellent my friend....so much feeling....outstanding poem 10+++ from me
a very passionated poem..loved the speed of emotions inside..10++++
Very nice job on this. I give you much props for being able to write such a piece. : : Vanessa: :
A beautiful composition with nice imagery. My 10 with it.
Wow, I was really moved by this. Wish I could write something like this.
So truely expressed.....ur lines do show the dimensions of ur feelings, its straight from heart and touches the heart. Enjoyed every line!
wew.... you're genius! ! ! I dont really understand, really... but i have my reasons! 1) i dont have my dictinary right now 2) I dont have any experience with love 3) my IQ score is waaayyy too low to understand difficult things but i do understand i enjoy reading this thanks for offering :)
Hmm..love at light speed...if only we could. Beautiful concept..beautiful imagery.
We are our mind more than anything else. We exist in a lonely thought.
Mind can traverse the Universe and go where it wills. Very Nice......10
our wishes, riches, exceeds our grasp.wonderful theme.beautiful poem
It's an amazing poem sarwar.. throught out poem is wonderful and i feel if i'll choose few lines to say that these are my favourite then that will not be justice to your poem as it's a wonderful expression of thoughts the way you present.. +++++++++10 For 'U' Regards, Priyaa Arora
Hi Sarwar, amazing rhyming in all your poetry. Loved them.