the night was loud again today
for the girl who couldn't sleep
so she went for a walk outside
all her thoughts dragging along
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The things that should disappear from you are that feel, and something that kill your happiness, you dont have to responsibility by disappearing yourself as you better life is what you deserve...so go for it never let the negative grab it from you...we better fight in the game than surrender but have chance to win..at least we are real to ourself..have something we must get...you not alone in this fight, you are with your body, soul and mind...three components...so it's not fair if you force on of them disappear like that..OK? _Unwritten SOul
The night when surroundings are quite thoughts become loud leading to an inner tour..life sought with pain rejoices in tears. Great poem!
May thy tears be disapper'd soon, , , Beautiful poem, , ,
May thy tears be disapper'd soon, , , Beautiful poem, , ,
Beautiful! This is a wonderful depiction of feeling.. Your words touch my heart..
Sometimes I feel like no-one else in the world can see me and what I do does not matter... Yet anonymity is my shield and it can help me become invincible... I love this one Silentpoet Grl... Keep em coming...
Sometimes it would be nice to dissapear, yet it's hard to. Fantastic poem! : D
Really wonderful write! I felt like I was there laying in the grassy field, looking at the stars. Sometimes I wish I could disappear. I know the feeling well. You have such talent. Love this poem! Keep penning :)